We are doing a hurumanu that is art it's about two bully's the bully's are me and sapphire and three kind people are kahciar makenzie and jessica they are on a playground and the bully's come over and then they push off makenzie and then the two people stick up for there friends.
the feedback was we liked how you labeled the people so we can see whos, who
Feedback: we liked the way you drew the props so we can see what they are.
the feedback was we liked how you labeled the people so we can see whos, who
Feedback: we liked the way you drew the props so we can see what they are.
Hey, Sapphire! It's Kahciar.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you added the storyline. Next time I think you could add the camera angles your going to use in your story.